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bleedingangel84 ([personal profile] bleedingangel84) wrote2012-05-15 04:11 pm
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Lessons from Mother Moon

A/N: I have no idea where this came from. I've never written one quite like this, so feedback and concrit is heartily welcome. I like the concept of this, but I'm not entirely sure of the execution. The idea made me feel peaceful, but I'm not sure I've done it justice. Opinions are welcome, even if you think it's shitty.

Dreaming of a world
far beyond this flesh-
she awakens to the
shining light of
the maternal moon-
who looks upon her
tears-with gentle love.

"Daughter, why do
you cry?"

"The night is long,
mother moon, and I sit here
alone."

"Daughter, fear you not
the solitary life, for
the entire world exists
within and around you."

"But mother,"
she wails, "how do I
take it?"

"Simply, my child,
by reaching out a hand."

[identity profile] nenne.livejournal.com 2012-05-16 07:46 pm (UTC)(link)
That was beautiful.

[identity profile] bleedingangel84.livejournal.com 2012-05-17 02:02 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much. I'm happy you liked it.