Apologies for an imperfect existence

[bleedingangel84]

Forgive me for the things I've done.
My intentions were good,
but things turned out wrong.

I pray you learn to see
with clearer eyes,
and stop my pain.

Imperfection is the hallmark
of human beings.
Expectations, I'll have you know
are heavy things.

Rescue me from this skewed reality.

Comments

[veritas03.livejournal.com]

You have a lovely way with words. Your poem reminds me of the Tracy Chapman song "At This Point in my Life". I don't know if you know it. Here are some of the lyrics:
At this point in my life
Although I've mostly walked in the shadows
I'm still searching for the light
Won't you put your faith in me
We both know that's what matters
If you give me a chance I'll try


You see I've been climbing stairs but mostly stumbling down
I've been reaching high always losing ground
You see I've conquered hills but I still have mountains to climb
And right now right now I'm doing the best I can
At this point in my life

At this point in my life
I'd like to live as if only love mattered
As if redemption was in sight
As if the search to live honestly
Is all that anyone needs
No matter if you find it


You see when I've touched the sky
The earth's gravity has pulled me down
But now I've reconciled that in this world
Birds and angels get the wings to fly
If you can believe in this heart of mine
If you can give it a try
Then I'll reach inside and find and give you
All the sweetness that I have
At this point in my life

[bleedingangel84.livejournal.com]

Ooh, thank you for such a lovely compliment and for pointing me toward that song. Tracey Chapman is amazing. I love the song "Fast Car", but it always makes me want to bawl like a baby. *hug*

[nenne.livejournal.com]

This is really heartbreaking.

[bleedingangel84.livejournal.com]

Thanks for your comment. <3