I think it just feels awkward to me because what was in my head was so much more than what made it to the page. I just feel like it wasn't as well-written as it could've been, but then, I feel that way about most anything I write, even now. lol
I'm glaI you didn't think it was too awkward, though. That makes me happy. i may just have to something soon. I have a few plot bunnies bouncing around in this head of mine.
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on 2015-11-21 09:45 am (UTC)I'm glaI you didn't think it was too awkward, though. That makes me happy. i may just have to something soon. I have a few plot bunnies bouncing around in this head of mine.