You usually write in snippets - a single conversation or situation that may be continued - but this is a fully-fledged story, that has lots of background and some promise of future and I really like that. :) It's a very well painted picture of Harry's reason that made him run, as well as the circumstances Draco finds him in. I imagine Harry needed to get away in order to define himself as something other than everyone's favourite hero, because that comes with a lot of expectation and exposure. But I'm really happy that he didn't run away from friendship and such, and that the promise of responsibility in the form of godfather, immediately makes him decide to come back - I imagine this is one role he'd like to do right. Even if it's not described in much detail, it's obvious that the bond they have with Draco runs deep, since they practically fall around each other's neck or, uhm, other body parts, LOL, the first time they see each other after a while. The void that forms between people who part without a proper goodbye doesn't seem that hard to bridge. :)
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on 2016-04-02 07:42 pm (UTC)Even if it's not described in much detail, it's obvious that the bond they have with Draco runs deep, since they practically fall around each other's neck or, uhm, other body parts, LOL, the first time they see each other after a while. The void that forms between people who part without a proper goodbye doesn't seem that hard to bridge. :)